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打造雅思小作文完美長(cháng)句
如何在雅思寫(xiě)作中寫(xiě)出漂亮的長(cháng)句一直是廣大考生關(guān)心的問(wèn)題，本文描述的是如何通過(guò)七個(gè)步驟，將一個(gè)只有主謂結構的簡(jiǎn)單句變成一個(gè)漂亮的復雜句，相信一定會(huì )對正在備考雅思考試寫(xiě)作的同學(xué)們有所幫助。
一、大家先寫(xiě)出一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，只有主謂結構，即Basic Fact ( subject + verb )
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.
二、添加數詞Numbers
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.
三、什么時(shí)間?When?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
四、數字是準確的嗎?Exactly this number?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
五、添加一個(gè)副詞Add an adverb
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
六、以名詞結構復述Rephrase with a noun
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
現在我們有了一個(gè)33個(gè)單詞的漂亮的長(cháng)句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS, GOOD LONG SENTENCE~
七、現在我們嘗試以名詞開(kāi)頭來(lái)重寫(xiě)這個(gè)句子。Can we begin with a noun?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
改寫(xiě)成：
There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
現在已經(jīng)37個(gè)單詞啦!37 words now!我不建議寫(xiě)得更長(cháng)了，its a nice long sentence~
總結：
寫(xiě)長(cháng)句子時(shí)常用的7個(gè)步驟Here are the 7 steps we used：
1. Basic Fact
2. Number
3. When?
4. Exactly this number?
5. Add an adverb
6. Rephrase with a noun
7. Can we begin with a noun?
以上就是手把手7步走教你在雅思小作文中寫(xiě)出完美長(cháng)句的全部?jì)热�，大家都get到了嗎?祝各位考生都能考出理想的分數!
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