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考研英語(yǔ)作文常見(jiàn)錯誤分析
【摘要】在英文寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,學(xué)生們常常誤入歧途卻自己不能察覺(jué)。一些常見(jiàn)的寫(xiě)作錯誤會(huì )出現在大部分考生的試卷上。比如審題不清,經(jīng)常出現偏題或跑題;習慣漢語(yǔ)思維,逐字翻譯;用詞搭配不當,張冠李戴;詞不達意,拼寫(xiě)錯誤嚴重;等等。具體來(lái)說(shuō),常見(jiàn)的錯誤主要有這些:
一、指代方面的錯誤
在使用代詞it,he,this,that,which,one等時(shí),前文中應出現明確的先行詞。
如:Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.,這句話(huà)中,him和it這兩個(gè)代詞都有明確的先行詞,分別是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含義非常清楚。
可是,不少學(xué)生在使用這些代詞時(shí),雖然自己很清楚它們指代的是什么,但在作文中卻沒(méi)有交代清楚,結果這些代詞非但沒(méi)有使行文簡(jiǎn)潔,反而造成了意思上的模糊,讓閱卷老師不知所云。
誤:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正:Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
【說(shuō)明】句1中的they既可指教師,也可指學(xué)生,屬指代不清的?梢园阉鼈冎械娜我庖粋(gè)改成單數名詞。因為單數名詞也可以泛指一類(lèi)。
二、修飾方面的錯誤
修飾語(yǔ)應緊靠被修飾的成分,并和它形成正確的邏輯關(guān)系。如果修飾語(yǔ)的位置不妥當,就會(huì )造出模棱兩可的病句。
誤:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
【說(shuō)明】句1要表達的是把有害氣體排放到農村,還是把工廠(chǎng)遷到農村去?顯然修飾語(yǔ)to the countryside的位置放錯了。如句2改變一下結構,就能清楚地表達要表達的意思了。
三、一致方面的錯誤
在一個(gè)句子內部或緊鄰的兩三個(gè)句子之間,要保持時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)、數等的一致。
誤:Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正:Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
【說(shuō)明】代詞應與所指代的先行詞保持人稱(chēng)和數上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
四、平行結構方面的錯誤
這里專(zhuān)指語(yǔ)態(tài)、比較級、非謂語(yǔ)形式、冠詞用法、可數名詞和不可數名詞、不定代詞單復數以及時(shí)態(tài)等錯誤。
1、誤:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
誤:A great change has been taken place since then.
正:A great change has taken place since then.
誤:But it may occur some new problems.
正:But some new problems may occur/arise.
誤:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【說(shuō)明】happen,take place,occur,arise等動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞詞組一般既不能用作被動(dòng)結構,也不能作為及物動(dòng)詞帶賓語(yǔ)的。但學(xué)生作文中類(lèi)似的錯誤較多:Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2、誤:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
誤:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
誤:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【說(shuō)明】這些都是在使用比較形式時(shí)出現的錯誤。尤其是第1例較普遍。如more easier,more stronger等。
五、斷句方面的錯誤
一句句子沒(méi)有結束,又開(kāi)始新的一句,結果造成句子結構不全,這就成為斷句。
誤:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.
【說(shuō)明】以because,since,if等引導的從句是不能獨立成句的,只能依屬于主句,所以不能寫(xiě)成另一句。
六、連詞方面的錯誤
作文中缺少必要的連詞,或錯用連詞的現象也比較普遍。
誤:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【說(shuō)明】學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作中往往意識不到連詞的重要,不善于使用連詞和連接副詞來(lái)明確標示出因果關(guān)系、轉折關(guān)系、遞進(jìn)關(guān)系等。
七、搭配方面的錯誤
學(xué)生作文中用詞搭配方面的錯誤也占有較大比例。曾經(jīng)在一次六級作文閱卷中,近千篇作文在表達上海交通越來(lái)越擁擠這個(gè)意思時(shí),幾乎沒(méi)有一篇用 heavier,大多數人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能與crowded搭配的。
1、誤:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【說(shuō)明】speed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能與fast,quick,slow搭配。但可以這樣說(shuō)A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2、誤:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.
【說(shuō)明】price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,published,reduced,reasonable等搭配,不能與expensive,cheap搭配,但可以說(shuō)In the past,milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.
由此可見(jiàn),要提高對詞語(yǔ)搭配的駕馭能力,除了要在平時(shí)的閱讀過(guò)程中多積累,還需要克服中文中諸如速度快、價(jià)格貴、學(xué)習知識、人減少等搭配的影響,避免寫(xiě)出look book或see book這樣的笑話(huà)來(lái)。
八、誤用方面
學(xué)生作文中對詞語(yǔ)的誤用也相當普遍,誤用詞語(yǔ)不僅不能準確地表達作者的意思,而且也會(huì )鬧出笑話(huà)。
1、誤:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
2、誤:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
【說(shuō)明】以上錯句都是因為對形容詞的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤勞的,工業(yè)上的應為industrial。effect一般用作名詞,其動(dòng)詞形式表示產(chǎn)生、實(shí)現,而這里的意思是影響,應換成affect。
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